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Author: Abe
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(Added on Jun 16, 2010)
(This month 10727 readers) (Total 12255 readers) |
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A woman decides to live alone in a lighthouse. A supernatural visitor changes her life. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
emodis
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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A strange story for a BDSM site since it seems to be more of a ghost story but its still interesting and i had no problem following the story line.
i look forward to reading more stories from this Author. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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While a good start to what could become an interesting story, Abe/Libertine should more often compare between what's inside his/her head and what's been put to paper. Like in the second paragraph, where it says "...()...Aunt Martha has given me a way to start a new life."...()... to immediately continue with ...()...In college, she had had a brief friendship with a graduate teaching assistant...()... which gives the reader the impression that the second line is about aunt Martha, instead of about Maud...
Technicalities, I know, but they are confusing. Just like the Abe/Libertine thing...
But like I said, good start.
JJ (8/10)
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