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Nanny Me
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Apr 1, 2002)
(This month 18000 readers) (Total 45131 readers) |
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Evil twins plan to enslave the female members of their family and anybody else that fall in the way of their twisted pervertion. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 19, 2007 |
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i am going against the grain here, i enjoyed the story, needs work on grammer but the story is still read able (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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I couldn\'t agree less with the other reviewers. I love L_O_V_E this story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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This would have been a very good story, if the author had bothered to SPELL-CHECK it. That's s-p-e-l-l - c-h-e-c-k. A grammar check wouldn't have done any harm either (g-r-a-m-m-a-r). I'm sure proof-reading would have done a lot of good as well (that's p-r-o-o-f - r-e-a-d-i-n-g). Paragraphs (p-a-r-a-g-r-a-p-h-s) would also help.
Nitrofox
PS I thought if I spelled every word out, it would make it clearer to y'all. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Apr 7, 2002 |
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Grammar, spelling, structure, plot--beyond comprehension. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Apr 4, 2002 |
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Another story that might have been good had it not been rendered unreadable
by errors in grammar. It doesn't appear to have even been run through a spell
checker. The evil twin boys in the story are named Troy and Frances. Frances is
a girl's name. The male version is spelled "Francis". That pretty much says it
all for this story. (3/10)
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