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Population-regulating slaughtering
Author: Rotneb
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(Added on Oct 11, 2010)
(This month 42154 readers) (Total 51772 readers) |
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Because of necessary population-regulation, a quarter of all girls aged eighteen years were selected as naked slaughter animals. After two month at the Meat Collecting Farm Tina were loaded to the slaughterhouse together with other naked slaughter animals. |
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| Reviewer:
lowstorm
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Apr 25, 2012 |
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Poor english, a lot of grammatical errors. No bestiality, exhibition, Rape, Fantasy, torture, Extreme violent (1/10)
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HuManiMal
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Dec 13, 2011 |
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Granted, as Major Littmann said "touching belief that girls die in orgasmic ecstasy when slaughtered" does little to overcome a completely unentertaining and depressing story. We treat our animals better in real life (over all) then depicted here. I did not count against the fact he speaks little English . (1/10)
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Polecat
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Good premise but the quality of the English detracts from any enjoyment of the story.
May I suggest getting some help?
Go to the forums and seek someone to help you edit the English, then you will see your ratings go up. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Rotnebs best yet. Although he needs to realise that Rape is forced sex while consensual,ordinary sex is sex, or a fuck, or intercourse or something but not Rape.
Otherwise the same touching belief that girls die in orgasmic ecstasy when slaughtered which pervades Rotnebs work marches on in Pidgin English and I salute him if not for his stylish prose then for sheer perseverence. (4/10)
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