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The Long Slow One
Author: pamela
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(Added on Oct 27, 2010)
(This month 21483 readers) (Total 27169 readers) |
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Ellen has secret needs which her husband can\'t or won\'t satisfy. Lilah is a different story, but she can\'t help the fact that her husband can make her climax on command. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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Very good story. Excellently written. Wonderfully crafted conversations, too. And a scene in the kitchen which slightly reminded me of "The Postman Always Rings Twice". Dark, unrestricted passion. Can't go wrong on that. Or you can, but in an exiting way.
"The Long Slow One" also feels refreshing. Because of the direct, crystal clear style. Just like those conversations I mentioned earlier. Straight. To the point. The right words in the right rhythm 'spoken' at the right time.
That's what this story has that so many lack: rhythm. It's a BDSM-boogie baby.
Great.
JJ (10/10)
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