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Lainey
Author: Quin
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(Added on Oct 27, 2010)
(This month 59492 readers) (Total 67726 readers) |
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Elaine Shapiro is a working MILF with dark desires. When her secrets are discovered by a coworker her fantasies become very real. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
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Reviewer:
seeder21
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Oct 29, 2010 |
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I am READY for part two!!! Great! Enjoyed it! (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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Coitus interuptus!! A great story that ended about 100,000 words too soon. Quin is a superb author, and in this story, what he has of it, has done another masterpiece. I cannot laud his writing enough, and can only hope that this is just an appetizer. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TMQuin
(Edit) (Nov 10, 2010)
- Unfortunately the writers notes for this story were lost during the recent board reset.
"Lainey" was originally written as a two handed "he said, she said," story in collaboration with a female writer. However the site that hosted the story is long defunct and the "she said" parts are missing. Since both writers were allowed to advance the plot, the subsequent chapters are very disjointed when only the male parts are read. If there is enough interest, I will see about rewriting the subsequent chapters (which would have to be done anyway if the story is to be continued.)
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