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Fanfic Schooldream Graduation
Author: Puppy
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(Added on Nov 13, 2010)
(This month 28106 readers) (Total 48138 readers) |
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Thanks to a memorable threesome, you\'ve lost your girlfriend Becky and as it turns out a lot more. In your misery you find an alternative, but is the substitute enough to mend a broken heart? |
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Reviewer:
saxman66
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Apr 3, 2011 |
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Puppy Very interesting. I have a nasty feeling that he knows the slave and is going to feel pretty bad if/when he finds out her identity. Suspect it's one of two people. Intriguing but definitely something odd going on. If I was him I would definitely be seeing Yuki ASAP to find out a little more about what's going on. So many people have disappeared that it's more than just a problem of Becky feeling miffed about what was going on. Also the fact he spent so long out of action seems suspicious to me. Not to mention that the site he's visiting and the sex club seem to include a lot of people he knows. If the slave is pregnant and it's not just some sort of enema say then I'm wondering if he's the father. I know it said he thought she looked two months pregnant but suspect that he wouldn't necessary be able to judge the date that well. I downloaded that game and will give it a try but how do you get it to run please? Have an old system with XP and it says it can't recognise it and asking me how to open it but not sure what would be appropriate. Tempted to vote 10 but want to see how things develop. Looking forward to seeing how things develop as the mystery is intriguing me. Not played any mystery games for ages but looking to find out what's going on and hoping it works out OK for the main characters. Thanks Saxman66 (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Puppy01
(Edit) (Apr 4, 2011)
- The games need the program TADS - see here: http://www.tads.org/ It will run with anything, though I myself have never run it in Win7 environment.
As for the story, I was/am aiming for mystery and intrigue. With next chapter, some of that mystery will be revealed. As for looking up Yuki... it's on the agenda, especially... oh well, let's not give any spoilers :) I'm hoping to complete the next two chapters this week. Whoops, better start writing!!!
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saxman66
(Edit) (Apr 4, 2011)
Puppy Thanks. Have downloaded the game and had a quick look but been busy most of the day so will have a bigger look tomorrow. Having a bit of troubling getting the right commands as too long since I've played character games. :( The other option for what's happening is that he is actually having a fantasy or possibly a dream while under the effects of the infection. Thanks Saxman66
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Reviewer:
Curtis
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Nov 28, 2010 |
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Wow! I can't believe this hasn't been reviewed yet. Original (just when I think I've read everything) and hot, I'm eagerly awaiting a second installment. Note that this is a genre story and therefore will not appeal to everyone, but it's well-written from a technical standpoint as well. Beware the use of the second (as opposed to first or third) person, but it's essential to the story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Puppy01
(Edit) (Nov 29, 2010)
- Thanks! I'm currently working on the third chapter (with some difficulties, but getting there ;) ) and the second installment should be online with the next update. If I work fast enough, the third could make it at the same time... So far I've got somewhere around 7 chapters planned.
As for original, wow... I didn't even think about it, I just 'fleshed' out the characters Goblinboy (the creator of the game the story is based on) made and the story wrote itself. Check out the 'prequals', called: School Dreams The Camping Trip School Dreams Forfeit Fantasy School Dreams Forever
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Curtis
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2010)
- And where would these prequels be found? I did searches for "School Dreams" and "The Camping Trip", and nothing showed up for this site.
- Replied by:
Puppy01
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2010)
- Not on this site, no. These aren't stories, but games. You will need TADS to run it.
http://aifcommunity.org/games/tads/SD3.rar for the last installment. This site will also explain TADS and offer the program. The earlier games I can't download at that site anymore and the only place I know is a yahoo group: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/aifarchive/
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