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Gail\'s Halloween
Author: Abe
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(Added on Nov 13, 2010)
(This month 19480 readers) (Total 39638 readers) |
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A girl is kidnapped and sold. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jo36c
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May 28, 2012 |
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I enjoyed this story a lot. The only thing I'd change is the age of the victim, I prefer older women or men when it comes to torture & suffering. But the tortures she endured were very well written & her feelings as she endured them so real. The 'explosive" enema blowing the cucumber from her rectum was very inventive. her final moments with "Satan's Penis" tearing her apart inside & her acceptance of her coming death were a real turn on for me. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Dec 13, 2011 |
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NC, Violent, Extreme, and likely Young must be included in description, if not others. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
MarginallyTruePig
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Jan 14, 2011 |
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Enjoyable little story with extreme contents. It is however rushed too fast, and inconsistent in the pain felt by the victim. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Willit
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Dec 2, 2010 |
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I love these short and sweet stories with extreme content. The best part was the scene with the four lesbians torturing Gail (breast hanging, whipping, forced cunnilingus, etc). If you had expanded that part of the story and left out the gang rape I think this would have been better. Still a cool story though.
Also, bland synopsis. You could have easily used the intro in the story as your synopsis for the website, and probably garnered a lot more readers. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2010)
- This was a good, useful review. Willit said what he liked, and then supplemented with constructive criticism and useful suggestions. I wish the story had been as good as this review.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Nov 28, 2010 |
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Those are Satanists, not Witches. They're about as different as Bhuddists and Hindus. Among other things, Witches don't believe in the existence of a devil, which would make it rather difficult for them to worship one. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Mr. Willit
(Edit) (Dec 2, 2010)
- No one who reads or writes this stuff gives a shit. I don't think he even refers to them as a witch cult or anything anyway. You read a great story like this and THAT was your takeaway?
- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2010)
- Great story? Seriously? Okay, good or bad is a matter of taste, and we differ on that. A matter of fact is:
"As the ceremony ended, the thin witch touched Gail with a cattle prod…" "However, when the witch thrust both hands into Gail's abdomen…" That's not Gail thinking, "God, what a witch!", that's an objective description by the omniscient narrator.
And obviously at least one of the readers here cared. Maybe someone else would've cared if he was maligning jews.
Anyway, Abe did have the decency to post this story in a readable format (for which I thank him, considering how the site has been butchering posts lately), and the spelling, punctuation and grammar are good. I should've mentioned those things in my initial review, rather than relying on the '6' rating to convey all that.
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