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Dear Clitical
Author: SensoryOverlord
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(Added on Dec 2, 2010)
(This month 34850 readers) (Total 52199 readers) |
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A teenage girl writes to Clitical, a 'female masturbation methods' forum, regarding her own experiences and their recent consequences. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nominalista
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Dec 9, 2010 |
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I enjoyed reading this. The progression is quite abrupt though, and this reader would like to know something more about how this extraordinary family (and this extraordinary girl) came to be the way it is.
If I can make a suggestion, it would be to cut mercilessly and make this story tighter. After a while it starts feeling a bit repetitious.
Thank you for writing this! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
SensoryOverlord
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2010)
- Well I... uh... what? Repetitious, but the progression is abrupt? You want it much shorter, but you want more detail?
I guess by 'abrupt progression' you mean the bathroom discovery scene? But that was meant to be 'abrupt'. The idea was this moment flipped a fairly normal family over into 'anything goes' mode. Bit of a demonstration of social mores hypocrisy, etc. Oh well.
As for length, I prefer long. What bugs me, is all the under-20K stories. Wish this site would set a minimum lower limit of story length, like say 15K.
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 6, 2010 |
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SensoryOverlord in full sensory overload mode, that's what this is.
A bit more tongue-in-cheek than what (I remember from) his earlier stories, but again so enticingly speaking to ones endorphines that it almost hurts (speaking of 'earlier' stories: is there a chance to see "The Research Subject" continued?)
"Dear Clitical" shows the return of a SensoryOverlord in excellent form, delivering a story written with great wit, centered around a very pliable and deliciously wicked main character who succumbs, first to her own needs, then to her 'evil' family's healthcare plan...
Great storytelling indeed and erotiscism at its best.
Welcome 'back', SensoryOverlord.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 6, 2010 |
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Well, but wasn't this story a little delight! Totally unbelievable and over the top, but totally, totally hot. I made it less than a third of the way through before abruptly (er) losing interest, but I'll be back to try the rest. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SensoryOverlord
(Edit) (Dec 6, 2010)
- Oh darn, I've failed miserably! I was actually striving to make it believable, despite also being over the top. Hint: the latter story provides an explanation for the beginning.
Ah well, I hope you get another third of the way through on next attempt. :) Thanks for the rest of the compliments.
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