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Boarding School Discipline Diary
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Dec 29, 2010)
(This month 45711 readers) (Total 73036 readers) |
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The trials and tribulations of a ward of a strict boarding school... Plenty of discipline and sex. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Rating: (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
d1ll1gaf
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Jan 4, 2011 |
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While this is not the author's best story (my vote there has to go to kidnapped), it has the potential to be a top 5 storey. I like the fact that the girls are getting fucked early but found that the discipline was on the tame side. Hopefully future chapters involve more painful tortures and plenty of additional fucking.
I gave this storey a 7 for now but it does have the potential to be a 9 (7/10)
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- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2011)
- Thanks for the review. A new chapter's been submitted and posted. Sorry for delay in responding, the server was malfuntioning...J LEWIS
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| Reviewer:
triple_mBB
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Jan 2, 2011 |
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I'll keep short, because English isn't my mother tongue. It's indeed not authors best story. I would give it an eight, because the readable part of the story was definitly worth it - if the story would have been complete. I think a malus of 1 point seems appropriate for this lack of completeness. 7 points. I hope I can adjust the rating when the story gets his end. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Jan 2, 2011)
- I believe your first review of one of my tales. Thanks for taking the time. It will have another chapter since it's at least getting reviews and not just readers. Thanks for the honesty... J LEWIS
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| Reviewer:
takarada
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Dec 30, 2010 |
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I think only the PC people offended by cruelty are reviewing. Get real, this is a BDSM story, go and read a romance novel if you don't like it.
And note, the story is getting lots of hits and the story title matches the story perfectly so they know what they are in for. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2010)
- Thank you for the defense of what I must admit, not one of my better tales. Not a ten by a long shot, but your reviews are appreciated (This not being the first of one of my stories you've been so kind to comment on) Again many thanks and a pleasant New Year... J LEWIS
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 30, 2010 |
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I too have in the past been a little unsettled by J Lewis' use of the 'oomph' sound effect, for the main reason that in Flemish it's the onomatopoeia for a bass horn...
And I have to admit that in "Boarding School Discipline Diary", the "thwacks" and "oomphs" are growing a tad thick. But from there descending all the way to a one and three score says in fact more about the 'reviewers' than about the story.
Unlike my fellow reviewers, I recommend this story. Because it is well written and it is good. Not extraordinary and not one of J's best, but still worth the read.
I would have given an eight-ish seven, but adding two to three points to compensate for the rather unfortunate scores of those who came before me.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2010)
- JJ, what can I say? Seems you once again arise to my defense, even to my lacking tale. But, to the Hemingway of reviewers, may I offer the hope of a prosperous New Year.
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 29, 2010 |
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A very poor effort with sound effects for descriptions but flashes of brilliant prose which have all the appearance of having been cut and pasted and welded, (wedded?) to the dross that is the "Story" for want of a better description, pobably not worth reading. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2010)
- My dear Dr. Watson... Err... I mean Major Littmann. Sorry, but my visual of you seems to take me to Sherlock Holmes and his trusty, if amusingly bumbling sidekick (Of the Basil Rathbone/Nigel Bruce era of course) I do appreciate your reviews (Which has scaled the spectrum for some of my tales) Sorry to disappoint you this time around. Anyway, drink down yor warm milk, nod off now and then, then return to wax poetic with a couple more of your enjoyable if sometimes bumbling reviews. All in good fun of course, I really do enjoy your reviews, and not just of my stories. Happy and safe New Year to you... J LEWIS
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| Reviewer:
lsue21
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Dec 29, 2010 |
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with all the incessant, unnecessary and repetitive pseudo sound effects, this is more like a Batman comic book than a story ! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2010)
- One's are very precious Isue 21 they infer a degee of badness which becomes a degree of excellence by virtue of the utter lack of ability displayed.
This dear reviewer is merely mediocre, Phwang Phoog Gong, or holy Mackrell Batman as Robin would have it.
- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Dec 30, 2010)
- Really? Maybe not one of my best (An addition to a quick added tidbit to another story) But a One? Maybe a hidden agenda here? Let's see now. Your first review under that name. Just happen to find my little tale in the middle of nearly 30 new stories. Find it boardering on illiterate. Congratulations! You've given me my first one in over thirty stories! Makes me wonder what you've ever contributed and under what name. Anyway, to each his (or her) own. That said, in all good fun, let me evaluate your review, okay? Take a look at your right hand, check the middle finger, flick it a few times, there you go, also a one... Oh, is that incessant, unneccessary and repetitive visual effects?...
- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Dec 30, 2010)
- Sorry, I forgot to add... Holy Cow Batman!!!
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