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Paying the price of success
Author: A.Broadsword
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(Added on Dec 29, 2010)
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Michelle sold her innocence for a Cello and three years music tuition, but now it was time to pay, in a way she coud never have forseen. |
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| Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Jan 16, 2011 |
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Very well written, with an interesting rhythm. Almost like a sip of "SPRITE" after drinking a too rich chocolate shake. A delightful change of pace that was perfectly timed. I rather suspect that the effect will be lost on the usual reader, but for some, this was almost perfection. Sir Broadsword has an excellent touch, and leads the reader on in a delicate fashion, not the usual thrustings and screams that are so prevalent in the more mundane stories. Thanks. (9/10)
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dragonfly996
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Dec 31, 2010 |
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Very original idea...so sensual... Thanks (10/10)
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Major Littmann
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Dec 29, 2010 |
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Recommendable, a few twists and turns, some strange and improbable sex with a machine whilst she plays Cello and a hidden dark secret, I suspect Broadsword is a musician, though probably not a Cellist! (8/10)
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