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Community Service
Author: Posing Somdomite
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(Added on Jan 27, 2011)
(This month 30385 readers) (Total 60044 readers) |
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Margo is a beautiful, red haired college girl. She heads into the ghetto one morning for Sorority ordered charity work, but faulty directions lead her directly to a black gang's drug den. If Margo wants to leave alive, she will have to rely on an entirely different type of community service. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
illk9
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Aug 4, 2012 |
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This was the best I've read in quite some time. The visuals are excellent! You painted a beautiful picture of her being humiliated and assaulted. It was as if I were there. Thank you and please write more. (10/10)
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worthless_cunt
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Jun 2, 2012 |
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loved it, enjoyed her humiliation and degradation, wished that it was there and treated in such ways. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slivy
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Nov 4, 2011 |
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I just love it. The kidnapping, the clothing, the basement, the chains, the whip... I hope there will be a cage too. And i hope it never ends... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 13, 2011 |
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Very well thought out, the gangsta dialogue sounds authentic although how would I know, it's amazing what decent formatting can do to what was completely unreadable.
More please! (9/10)
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Venom
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Feb 1, 2011 |
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Overall a good start. There are some minor flaws, but nothing too serious.
Unfortunately, unlike the version posted in the Forum, this one lacks formal structure -- it has no blank lines and no real breaks.
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1st of February: I just saw the edited version. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2011)
- Which forum? The formatting is migraine inducing.
- Replied by:
posingsomdomite
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2011)
- Hey Venom!
Not sure why the formating is like this. I submitted the same version as the forum.
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