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Property of Devil's Outlaws
Author: just2twisted
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(Added on Jan 28, 2011)
(This month 353504 readers) (Total 491660 readers) |
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A beautiful 24-year-old Asian girl goes on vacation but gets lost in a small town and quickly kidnapped by a ruthless and violent biker gang. She struggles to survive as they turn her into their personal fuck-toy, beating and raping her constantly. Will they eventually demand ransom from her family? Sell her into slavery? Kill her? Her fate may be uncertain, but suffice to say, it likely will not be a happy one. |
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Sarai.K82
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Oct 5, 2015 |
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Powerful! Very dark. Hope to see more from this author for sure. (9/10)
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andersbac
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A classic. They don't come any better – or more cruel – than this. (10/10)
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dhemius
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Feb 20, 2012 |
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Glad to see you keep on writing. The story is great. I love the constant abuse she is forced to endure, though I'd also love is some of the johns forced Hannah to ride and fuck them. Or to lick their asses like the gang did ;)
Also loved how she finally is broken and wishes only to die, no such easy escape for her :>
Keep writing! (8/10)
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Alebeard
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Jan 4, 2012 |
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Very nice, hoping to see more abuse/torture fantasy in coming chapters! (9/10)
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nassim
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May 25, 2011 |
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I'd definitely agree that this was well written - however it does get a little repetitive - but nonetheless it is very good reading. (9/10)
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Terrier
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Apr 29, 2011 |
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Intense and interminable suffering for the poor victim, with something for everyone! A perhaps rather overlong and repetitive first gangrape session (for us, not for the lucky guys in the story!) leads into an exploration of many of the delicious ways in which a woman can be broken down and made a whore, and of the excitement and pleasure to be had from her suffering.Desperate disobedience and the ensuing tortures would be good now. But is she to be killed or does she become yet another unquestioning slave? Either outcome could involve more throbbing action! (9/10)
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Mr. Willit
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Apr 9, 2011 |
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At this point you've posted 4 parts, and so far they've escalated well. It's not easy to keep up a story like this, so really nice job. I'd love to see a grand finale with this one for the next part, rather than see it drag out or just be left as it is. Possibly focus more on torture and humiliation rather than endless gangbangs for the final part. Have her totally disobey Tank or something. That seems the most plausible. (9/10)
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Mar 8, 2011 |
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If you are into kidnapping and sadistic gang rape, then this story is for you! Well described, well written. Well proofread and edited. While mechanically the story is fine, it gets repetitive. 30+ Bikers doing the same thing for 24 hours becomes numbing. Not to the young thing being raped, mind you, just to the reader. A bit less quantity and a bit more variety and it could garner a higher score.
the Snark (8/10)
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