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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
illk9
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Aug 12, 2012 |
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You're writing paints a great picture. I read this and I see it happening. Great work! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lonewolf8
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Apr 19, 2011 |
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Extremely good story! Rises above the level of most other authors on here once again, and knows how to get the story told in an erotic fashion to arouse his readers.
My biggest beef with this one was I would have liked to see a little more detail and a longer chain of sex and abuse for the helpless Emily...
One reviewer mentioned it was a 'standard situation" story, which to me, is not a problem at all, if the story rises above the norm. And this author often does just that!
Not his very best, but still a keeper! Must read!
Very Good effort! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 4, 2011 |
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Written too choppy to my liking. Too detached as well, like Shabba was on autopilot while writing.
Set-up of "Kenyan Customs Nightmare" is pretty routine as well, with some for the genre standard situations and turns and twists which can be seen coming from miles afar.
Still decent enough to keep on reading.
Expected more from Shabbadew based on what I read from him before. But, that's me maybe expecting too much, then...
JJ (7/10)
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- Replied by:
shabbadew2002
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2011)
- Thank you for taking the time to review. This story is actually a prologue for Sex Slaves of Kenya and Family Abused in Kenya - soon to be posted.
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