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Cherish Fuck-pig
Author: nassim
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(Added on Feb 18, 2011)
(This month 46346 readers) (Total 65203 readers) |
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A young feminist moves to the town of Cherish, and finds herself in for a rude awakening. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Real_American
(Edit) |
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Dec 3, 2015 |
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Why wouldn't Paula just cutoff his genitals while he's sleeping? (4/10)
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Reviewer:
chzwiz007
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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I had trouble following the time line near the end. There was some mention of getting tits and tatoos and piercings. That takes time. From the dialog it seemed like it was just yesterday she had gone through the initial training. Something was needed to connect her training to her current state of mind. OTOH, I did get a nice hard on and I usually do not like NC, scat, and water sports. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
nassim
(Edit) (Nov 14, 2011)
- Yeah, I probably could have done a better job of making it clear that about 6 months to a year had elapsed since her first training session had begun. I've been thinking of adding another chapter, and that might be something that gets fixed. I'm glad you enjoyed it even though some subjects weren't your cup of tea, thank you very much for your feedback!fe
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Reviewer:
a.broadsword
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Feb 19, 2011 |
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Oh Wow, That is how to write a pig story! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nassim
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2011)
- Thanks! I'm a big fan of "Becoming Cupcake" by the Mayor of Cherish, and was looking to fuse that universe with a Max Hardcore/Henry Miller/Valerie Gray-Grey sensibility.
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Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 18, 2011 |
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I can't really see it on a shelf at Wal Mart but it's an excellent example of its genre. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nassim
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2011)
- Thanks! I'd rather shop at Target:)
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