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Sarah and the Wine Cellar
Author: SirRoundSound
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(Added on Mar 6, 2011)
(This month 46981 readers) (Total 63238 readers) |
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A voluptuous teen is kidnapped and tortured in such horrible, painful, disturbing and disgusting ways that no girl her age could ever deserve. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
redneck one
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Mar 14, 2011 |
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Really like it. I like the idea of the girl being a BBW and not the typical thing girl with bolt ons. The torture was well thought out and realistic.
Looking forward to your next story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
FryingScot
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2011)
- Totally agree. Well written and well paced. Let's have more.
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Willit
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Mar 12, 2011 |
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I really enjoy stories of this length and detail. Scat is not a big turn on for me, but the pain and hardship aspects of the torture are. Nice work. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 9, 2011 |
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Well written essay, I cannot deny that. But where it goes wrong is, well, right at the start with the tractor wheel. While the idea isn't bad, the rim's edge on such a wheel is far too high, making it act like a bath tub when tying someone to it. Which means it is fairly impossible to tie someone to such a rim in a cross without either breaking the girl's arms and/or lifting her off the rim...
Descriptions and stuff are okay, as is the lecherousness of the rather sinister torturer.
JJ (7/10)
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coyote3k
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Mar 8, 2011 |
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Very good. The content usually wouldn't have excited me (and like Snark said, a little young for my tastes) but the way it was written made it great. Constantly increasing the intensity then back down to start building up again. Please continue writing! (9/10)
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Snark
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Mar 7, 2011 |
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Very descriptive, imaginative, decently done. Spell check could help, but proofreading and editing are okay. She's a bit young for me...perhaps if she had an additional 6-8 years it would pique my interest more. But otherwise a good start. Can we expect more? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Mar 9, 2011)
- If she was six years older she wouldn't be a 'voluptuous teen'. You knew how old the mare was when you bought her, sir. And the story did say 'End'.
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Snark
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2011)
- A teenager could be 13...or 19. Which is more to my preference. I did not let that skew my rating. So apparently you're going to be a "one and done"? If my reading and review is an affront to your sensibility I can refrain in the future.
the Snark
- Replied by:
SirRoundSound
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2011)
- You seem confused. "Curtis" is not the author. I am. And I appreciate your input.
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2011)
- Sir: quite right! I didn't check the name. Perhaps Curtis would like to pen a story for all to peruse.
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