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A Puppies Life
Author: Dom-son
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(Added on Mar 16, 2011)
(This month 32512 readers) (Total 40732 readers) |
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The journey of the transformation of a beautiful Japanese woman to a puppy girl and the training she loves. |
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| Reviewer:
Laura.Dane
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May 15, 2011 |
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The story caught my attention and intrigued me. I would definitely read more. The actual writing could be stronger with a little more attention to grammar and spelling. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
shaedee
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Mar 21, 2011 |
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The story is pretty interesting, the spelling is awful and bad enough that it distracts from the story, pail for pale, through for thought, and numbers of other mistakes. Please it is a good story, take the time to proof it or ask someone who does spell well to do so. Thanks for the story. (5/10)
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