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Corporate Owned
Author: total_amateur
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(Added on Apr 6, 2011)
(This month 21085 readers) (Total 24144 readers) |
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A young man becomes a male corporate owned secretary in a new female driven business world. Slow and more submission oriented story than explicitly sexual. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rufustcat
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May 23, 2011 |
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Well written and a great premise. Can't wait for more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 13, 2011 |
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A very well thought out two part fantasy, told in an appropriately clinical manner. Jiffy's feelings and emotions are excellently portrayed and are consistant throughout. Personally i would have liked some background information on how the women were able to start dominating the country/world. So i am afraid i can only give a nine.
Thank you Total Amateur for a thoughly enjoyable read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mechgogo
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May 9, 2011 |
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Intriguing. Not a career path I'd chose for myself were I in the protaganist's position but a good story nonetheless. The universe the story takes place in is well-formed and just divergent enough from our own reality to not be unbelievable. The characters are solid and the action moves along without skipping over important details. Not a 10 but still a job well done.
(8/10)
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