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Summer Training
Author: T.S.Fesseln
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(Added on Apr 10, 2011)
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The sequel to 'Summer Project'. Stephanie continues her training to be Jeffery's slave |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 31, 2011 |
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PART 1:
An excellent continuation of "The Summer Project". i am facinated to know if the step-brother will ever tell his step-sister the trueth about her "capture", if He does how will she take it?
i like Doctavian's postcript about bondage, now that could be a really wonderful and insightful story (perhaps i will learn why i like being tied up :p ).
Thank you for such an enjoyable read.
PART 2: A good second chapter, but chapter three looks as though it is going to be really interesting. Hope we do not have to wait to long for the next installment.
PART 3:
Another excellent chapter, introducing the friend makes for a nice bit of tension, will she find out their secret or won't she? Will Mster have two slaves? So many facinating possibilities. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Laura.Dane
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May 15, 2011 |
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This story is well-written. More importantly, it really digs into my fantasies. The plot of a girl becoming her stepbrother's slave is done in a hot, erotic manner that kept my interest all the way through. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
doctavian
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Apr 11, 2011 |
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"Summer Training" is just excellent. T.S. uses it to explores some fascinating questions. Take the superb statement : "Being bound made her feel safe....It was strange, it made her feel both safe and vulnerable at the same time." What a VERY insightful, and thought provoking observation.
T.S. uses "Summer" to explore this intriguing relationship between Stephanie and her brother. Example "I knew that I was safe with him." "He gently kissed her on the neck." It makes the reader wonder has their relationship progressed to the same intensity that a husband and wife share?" If not, what is it? Could they be bound by even stronger than a husband and wife by their "emotional and sexual needs.?
And then there is the simply superb way T.S. describes events. Ex: "Feeling her silken muscles grip him" and "Drinking in the warm rush of pleasure that washed over her." Now THAT'S writing.
Another brilliant observation about human sexuality is T.S's statement "But 'IT' (her/my enslavement) is the only way that I can deal with what happened to me. I need you to be in charge of me SO I DON'T HAVE TO." and "Being seen in the house naked didn't seem to matter anymore."
As I said "Summer training" is excellent. It's an erotic story for the thinking man or woman. What I hope T.S. explores with us next is: How does the exact sensation of having her brother bring her to orgasm, when she is bound, and has totally surrendered to his control feel differently than an orgasm she might experience in a "normal" dating situation with a "boy friend."
I think that it was Hemingway that said: "I would rather write one great line, than a novel full of S...t!"
"Summer training" has lots of great lines
Summery: Job well done T.S. Job well done indeed!
Thank you for sharing "Summer" with us,
Yours, Doctavian
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
doctavian
(Edit) (Apr 11, 2011)
- A couple of other topics that I would love to have T.S explore are: "The eroticism of bondage" What causes women/ and or men to be erotically aroused by being being bound. Is it the total loss of control? Or the knowledge that some one else can do WHATEVER they want to them and that there is NOTHING, that they can do to prevent their being "violated?" Or is it the pain of immobilization? And if it is. Just how does the sensation of physical pain become converted into erotic sensations? Few authors could tackle these topics. But I have a feeling T.S. can do it. And do it very well.
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