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The Making of a Super Bowl Champion
Author: Tara Casalino
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(Added on Apr 17, 2011)
(This month 10162 readers) (Total 11156 readers) |
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The story of a male sub's journey from college student to the quarterback of a team in the Super Bowl. The story is told from the Domme's perspective. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
mechgogo
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Apr 21, 2011 |
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This is an extremely well done piece of work. The characters are well-formed, the world fully developed. The interaction between the Dom and Sub is believable and lacking any of the over the top, bombastic scenery-chewing that is all too prevalent in BDSM erotica. The bond between the two is obvious and the sort of thing I would expect to see in the real world and the eroticism is hot without being overdone. I would put this story on a par with Number One Pony and the works of Captv8D . (9/10)
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