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Broken by Monica
Author: Rolf Larsen
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 55345 readers) (Total 80126 readers) |
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A dominating teenager makes a classmate her slave |
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Average (?): (8/10) |
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Reviewer:
stilets
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Jul 15, 2011 |
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I've loved this story. Very seducing, you make her seduce the reader too. Very hot story. I hope you write more, the longer the better. It'd be great to continue with these same characters and just face more situations, moods and how they affect them. I bet soon other characters would like to try to mess it while they try to build it. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
slave4life901
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Jun 19, 2011 |
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I really enjoed this story very much. I hope it continues. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
hb59
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Jun 9, 2011 |
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Very erotic story without being gross. Good descriptive narrative of a budding dominitrix in the raw! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
odslutpuppy
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Jun 2, 2011 |
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Wonderful beginning to what i hope will be a long and twisted adventure. (9/10)
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