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Field Trial No. 11
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Apr 29, 2002)
(This month 147517 readers) (Total 198474 readers) |
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Two independently wealthy brothers kidnap a mother and daughter for 72 hours of rape and torture. The brothers carefully plan the abduction of the women from a local mall then take them to an isolated farmhouse where their wealth has created a well equipped dungeon where they can realize their most perverted fantasies. The story is written in multiple first person parts where each participant tells their own version of events. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 5, 2007 |
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I like this story quite a bit, although some of the contents are devoid of passion. I think there is quite a bit in the idea of making the victims recount their experiences, and the mental cruelty inherent in that, and hope either Harry or someone else takes this idea further. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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only thing missing is that i wish it was not first person (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tonton1957
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Sep 24, 2002 |
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Excellente idée, bonne histoire, bien que par moment les victimes semblent bien complaisantes (8/10)
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bigone
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May 2, 2002 |
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This is an excellent story, well-written and imaginative. One of the narrators points out that these brothers have not extended their experimentation to killing or maiming. It is to be hoped that Bill will give up this sentimental limitation in the interest of true academic integrity, to follow the truth wherever it leads. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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May 1, 2002 |
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Sex and violence by the numbers; the use of multiple first person narratives is a good idea, but the execution left much to be desired. It's pretty obvious that the author is in uncharted waters when it comes to describing the female personality under stress. The challenge is then complicated further by the difference in ages of the victims. The author should be complimented however for having the courage to attempt such a bold approach as this. I think this writer shows some talent and look forward to future efforts from him. (6/10)
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