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Bus control - 3
Author: Clara High
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
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Another point of view to the gender police control activity in a femdom society... |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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i agree with teleya that if this story had received some careful editing then i could have given it a higher rating. The ending seemed somewhat odd, we are told that the old man always cared for his family yet his wife said that he made their lifes awful. Come on make up your mind. (5/10)
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teleya
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Once again i am convinced that if the author would spend the hour needed to carefully edit the book - than it would have received a higher rating. Too many basic elementary school grammatical mistakes. One or two could be easily overlooked, but a few dozen?
- The story line and the imagination of the author is quite nice, though not particularly fresh. But freshness is over rated. The question is does this book have a specific direction it is heading towards? Or is this more of an overall ramble?
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(7/10)
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