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Hostile Takeover: Locked up, Knocked up
Author: js207
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(Added on Oct 4, 2011)
(This month 25990 readers) (Total 42851 readers) |
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The narrator had a good career as a stock trader, until she got greedy and someone exploited it to mount a hostile takeover of her life. |
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Maya M
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Jul 26, 2012 |
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Oh my gosh! The bit where the dildo slips out had me shivering. And what the tags suggest for part two is irresistible. Please don't leave this one hanging! (10/10)
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Martiniman
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This is a spectacular start to what I think will be a fantastic story? When can we expect part 2? I'm really hoping its soon! (10/10)
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brace
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Oct 15, 2011 |
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Hostile Takeover part 1 is a good lead in with a lot of potential. I hope that the apparent rush to finish part 1 is a quirk, and that the time and care that was put into the rest of the story continues. (8/10)
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Kingofsting
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Oct 15, 2011 |
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Great to see new story cant wait for part 2. This one has lots of potential. My thanks to the author. (8/10)
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iceblock
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Oct 5, 2011 |
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I'm glad to see new material from js207. Pity it's not a continuation of any of your previous work but always nice to see something new. Hostile Takeover is well written although at the moment the story remains fairly predictable in terms of just another blackmail story. Hopefully there will be more parts posted, given the reader codes, it seems there should be. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
js207
(Edit) (Oct 5, 2011)
- Thanks! Yes, there's another part already written, just needs integrating. (I wrote that part first, then wrote this as a prequel, and will link the two and upload the result soon.) It's part 2 which gets 'darker' and features the simulated pregnancy, among other fun experiences for the poor narrator!
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