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Kollany Thirty-Five
Author: The Technician
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(Added on Dec 27, 2011)
(This month 150464 readers) (Total 170036 readers) |
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Kollany Thirty-Five is an Erotic Novel in Eight Parts. It is set in the future on a deep space colony and follows the life of Princess Shumara Seven from the time that her plot to assassinate her father, King Humana One, fails to the day of her sentencing and judgement one week later. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Alix
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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Looking foward too the next chapter. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sapphyr
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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This is set in a futuristic planet populated by a few, genetically-modified, survivors of the destruction of Earth. Our hedonistic protagonist has broken most of the world's laws with her debauchery... read as she gets her due punishments. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 31, 2011 |
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There is something not right with this story, I was left struggling to understand who or what "The One" was and what the collar was and why would she want to kill the king if she wasn't next in line to the throne. I feel the beastiality was unnecessary but the ending is most unsatisfactory, with the colour coding for status, surely we should have read of such hybrids erlier and not had them sprung on us at the last page. I think the plot should have been written and then fleshed out for such a long story, as it was it reads like it evolved line by line with no clear sense of direction (8/10)
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fixingbeast
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Dec 28, 2011 |
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It created an environment of intense shame for the female. It is well written I just didn't like the beastiality part. I also wanted her to always feel her shame but be driven to be wanton as well. I wanted her to stay normally human but have to submit to anyone without the real desire to do so. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2011)
- So, you wanted to read a different story, then.
- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2011)
- I got the impression she was turned on by the humilliation rather than ashamed.
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