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The House Of Ali - The Organization Series 1
Author: slave ruthie
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(Added on May 14, 2002)
(This month 60458 readers) (Total 157843 readers) |
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A series of interwoven short stories about a clandestine international organization that abducts and trades slavegirls to influence world events. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tragedy3
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Jan 27, 2006 |
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the story line and writing were excellent. it reads like a novel and the reader can relate to the characters thru the fine detalis. was very moved by tarik and no-name. keep up the good work. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2006)
- thank you very much for your kind comments and the rating, tragedy3 :) i'm glad you enjoyed it. this was my first attempt at writing anything longer than a short single chapter story. i hope i've learned and improved since then but that's for O/others to judge...
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| Reviewer:
Onid
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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Tantalizing imagination, and an exciting read. Loved the attention to detail in the bondage... fiendishly pleasurable to (re)read.... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Nov 3, 2005)
- thank You, Onid :)
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| Reviewer:
PhoenixPrime
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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slave ruthie,
I've just finished reading the available chapters to the second story of yours that I've read, The Organization, Series 1, and wish to compliment you on a well written story with a tight plotline, good character interactions (for instance Tanic (sp?) and No Name and the result when she died).
The various torments were not only imaginative but extremely well detailed as were the reactions to them.
I would again like to extend an invitation to e-publish them for you and had I realized you currently had a Master prior to my email to you would have directed my invitation to Him so he could review my site and assist in making the decision. I trust he will realize it was ignorance of his existance and not rudeness that caused my not including him in the email I sent.
Master PhoenixPrime
PS I am passing on your stories to my two slaves to read and enjoy as both are, *BS*, wonderful masochistic painsluts.
Again my email address is thephoenixprime@yahoo.com or I can be emailed via my site. Hoping for your reply soon. PP (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Nov 3, 2005)
- thank You for Your generous review :)
my Beloved Master has decided that as these stories were originally posted on Master Gary Roberts' Darkstar site, He would have to give His permission before they could be used on another commercial site. Master Gary kindly permitted the stories to be given to Jinn Sir for this library if He saw fit (and so far, He kindly has!)
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| Reviewer:
Wildcard
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Jul 28, 2004 |
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I love these stories and the characters. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2005)
- thank You :)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 19, 2004 |
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Powerful story, with well-defined, surprising characters. Good story, almost begs for sequels. Bravo! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2005)
- thank You :)
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| Reviewer:
princessholly92
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Mar 24, 2004 |
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Extremely well written and very intriuging. Plot keeps you wanting more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2004)
- thank you very much for your kind encouragement - i was writing recently to the fantastic author Jacqueline Carey (Kushiel's Dart) who graced me with a reply and i can tell you that it means a great deal to have ANY feedback from readers :)
i'm trying to join the threads of the Organization Series together and will haveto rely heavily on the critical eyes of readers to point out errors or inconsistencies so pleeeeese if you spot things that don't make sense or need changes tell the authors - we can't improve without hearing comments (both bad and good)
love & respect
ruthie
XXXXXX;)
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| Reviewer:
mickni2000
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Dec 7, 2003 |
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A very well-written and exciting story. The ordeals are different and detailed but not too detailed. May I suggest some more cell endurance in severe restraints? For instance heavy leather harnesses squeezing the breasts and a croth strap holding a hollow butt plug and a dildo at the front combined with a rubber hood totally blinding her and making her feeling extremely hot inside the hood or chained to the bunk in the cell with legs widely spread and hands above the head spread as well. After some time she is released and put into steel restraints with neck collar and cuffs for feet and hands. The chains can be adjusted in length giving her more or less freedom to move. Another cell ordeal is to keep her in a hot cell in a heavy rubber enclosure totally sealing her body save for holes for breathing and feeding. Then she can ‘live’ like this for a while. All these means of punishment used to make her realise that she better obey the orders. I have used some of these restraints in my stories uploaded this site. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2003)
- thank you very much - i was thinking along similar lines and hope to incorporate this into the story called "encounter with destiny" - please feel free to make more suggestions...what kind of restraints do you have in mind???
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| Reviewer:
smiley010
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Oct 16, 2003 |
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All the stories in this series are well written and most enjoyable. Keep up the good work (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- thank you for your encouragement!
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| Reviewer:
julise
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Oct 13, 2003 |
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I recently reread this story and I forgot how appealing it is content wise and emotionally. I think that slave ruthie has wonderful talent and this story is always such an intense but wonderful read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- blushing with embarrassment here, julise!
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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May 31, 2003 |
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Good style but found its content unrelenting - Readers and characters need a little more breathing space. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- i found this review very useful - thanks! its a practice thing, i guess, trying to get pace right and i hope my later efforts are better but i also worry about being too drawn out or long-winded - aaaaaaaaaaaaaargggghhhhhhhhhh!!! (lolol)
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| Reviewer:
Lady Classy
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Mar 2, 2003 |
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I do like all the stories that slave ruthie has written...so much so I have instructed my slave to read them as well, keep up the great work slave ruthie. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- thank You for Your kind comments, Ma'am :)
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| Reviewer:
WMassa
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Jan 23, 2003 |
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Nice piece of art, though a little long and off from being extreme, but worth reading anyway, and a lot of fun, once you got the time to spend... (7/10)
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- Replied by:
ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2003)
- thank you for your review :)
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| Reviewer:
kleintje15
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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the stories were very good i really liked second chance it was my fav from the stories (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2003)
- thanks! :)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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Sorry, but this is the kind of detailed descriptive stuff that turns some of the people on - as you see from the ratings - and turns others right off (as you can guess, I'm in the latter group) because there's no insight into the why and wherefore: no real emotion. And that gratingly incorrect "it's" in the first paragraph didn't help... (5/10)
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- Replied by:
veru_skjava
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2003)
- While you have every right to your opinion, likes and dislikes, and far be it from me to suggest other wise. For the purpose of those who do look at reviews prior to reading a story I wish to comment that there is a great deal of the whys and wherefore, an extraordinary amount of emotion, so mush so that I myself found a relationship of affection, as well as hatred developing with various characters.
The author has painstakinly conveyed the emotional bond of both master and slave through out the story.
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ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2003)
- i'm sorry it wasn't for you but thank you for taking the time to review it. with hindsight maybe the stories should be split with 2nd Chance on its own...
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| Reviewer:
ozara
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Oct 24, 2002 |
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This was very well written! The wish of every slave! Good prevails over evil. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2002)
- wow! thanks! :)
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Oct 20, 2002 |
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WOW, I was glued to my seat, and very disappointed to reach the last available chapter. I could identify completely with Alexa, and Guljana. PLEASE hurry, and submit additional chapters. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to hear the rest. A few proofreading errors, for example Stacey is accidentally Tracy a few times. Other than that the style is excellent. Exciting and believable story, characterizations are exceptionally written.
I had to increase my rating, the writing just keeps improving, the story line is griping, the character development fantastic. Previous proof reading errors have been corrected in the update. This story has the ability to be a published work.
Only one problem at this point, the edge of my seat is getting hard to balance on. More please. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2002)
- lol sis - you're embarrassing me!
:)
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| Reviewer:
bigone
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May 30, 2002 |
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Some good ideas, but not well-written and, as a result, too slow-moving and tedious. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
ruthiesb69
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2002)
- thank you for your review - i've added another series of related chapters called 2nd Chance and wonder if you think this works better? i value all feedback :)
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