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The Night Before Author: LemonTart
(Added on Jan 19, 2012) (This month 73734 readers) (Total 81359 readers)
After a night out without permission, a girl begs her owner to fuck her.

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Average Rating: (8/10)
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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 19, 2012
Two times nothing in this case equals eight.
Story doesn't amount to much and there's not a hint of a plot, but LemonTart succeeds in creating an atmosphere, in painting a clear picture through dialogue and action/reaction.
"The Night Before" is a bit like shooting into a cloud at 250 miles per hour and then, once inside, seeing things in technicolored slow-motion.
Like I said, not much of a story, but the little that's there is very well done -and written.
JJ (8/10)

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