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Mistaken Identity
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Jan 28, 2012)
(This month 31421 readers) (Total 55629 readers) |
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Executive Fantasises offers the ultimate sexual experiences - to those who can afford it. When one of their clients orders the Kidnapped and Sold At Auction package what could possibly go wrong |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
gregor2001us
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This is an excellent story with a neat plot twist that helps submissives feel the character's tension of being trapped and forced into submission. Character development is excellent and listening to the character's thoughts running through their heads is wonderful. (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Another wonderful story from the Grand Mistress of erotic stories. The mistake over "kidnapping" the wrong woman is plausible, i am a taxi driver and once picked up the wrong customer just because i only asked her name (now i want more details like where she is going to, to check it agrees with the details passed to me).
There is sadly one very bad flaw and if i were a UK or even a European farmer i would be very angry with our talanted Miss Jones. In chapter two she wrote "She felt like some sort of veal calf, confined and unable to move." Since the 1970's laws have been passed her in the UK and Europe giving more freedom of movement to veal cattle, it is even starting to happen in the USA and should be totally in place there by 2017. Rose Veal (only sold in the UK) has the RSPCA's approval and there is also Free Range Veal, both forms of veal are pink in colour due to the freedom of movement the calf is allowed. Miss Jones listening to the Archers on Radio 4 at 7pm Monday through to Friday solves a lot of farming questions :-)
Other than that farming error, thank you Oh Talented One for such a great story. (10/10)
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rocketXpert
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Feb 21, 2012 |
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I have to commend you on the ingeniousness of this premise. In the past, I've often found non-consensual erotica more exciting to read, but I always end up with conflicted emotions, not the least of which is anger towards the dominant figures who cause so much grief for the poor victims in such stories. Although I know I'm reading a fantasy, I can't help dissecting it from a moral or logical standpoint. This setup solves that dilemma rather neatly by making everyone involved the unwitting victim of circumstance. Susan's tormentors do not actually wish her any real harm and even believe they are simply doing what she wants, and so I don't hate them. It also helps greatly to know that Sue is deriving no small amount of pleasure from her predicament in spite of herself, and that she ultimately ends up happier and more fulfilled than she was at the beginning. In a way, the entire situation is darkly comical. I like the dangerous thrill of a non-consensual scenario, but I also like happy endings, so it is very satisfying to read a story in which those two things are not mutually exclusive. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Feb 22, 2012)
- Thank you for your kind words. This was, indeed, the circle I was trying to square; how to write non consensual scenes without making the Domme some sort of psychopath.
This sort of organisation does actually exist, although the ones I found when doing my research were nowhere near as upmarket as Executive Fantasies. Still, maybe it does exist after all, only so discreetly that we never find it. We can dream, can't we? ;-)
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| Reviewer:
Resiege
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Feb 19, 2012 |
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Outstanding (10/10)
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onewhoadores
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Another very tasty D/s morsel from the best in the business. Thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks as always, Lisa (10/10)
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Martiniman
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Jan 30, 2012 |
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Another excellent story from Lisa Jones! A wonderfully fresh story with a great twist! (10/10)
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Jan 30, 2012 |
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All right. This turned out to be much better than I expected. Based on the starting circumstance I was prepared for a cliche, but the actual story was quite good, and I spent most of my time wavering betwixt an '8' and a '9'; the ending, which was quite satisfying and tolerably plausible, put me over the top. (9/10)
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