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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
littleone__
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Feb 8, 2012 |
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It's a good story and shows promise that it could get better. One thing bothers me and I see it all the time in rape stories. She has been brutally kidnapped, her body tied in way that would make it throb with pain, beaten, terrorized with a knife, told her freedom has been taken from her, cruelty stripped naked by her terrorist etc and then she gets aroused. She gets wet, she desires sex. Come on, guys, it doesn't work that way. Sure in time the Stockholm syndrome will set in but that takes a long time. But then it seams ever male has this same fantasy of instant arousal. I don't care what kind of pain slut or how submissive she is it just is not at all real for that instant turn on to happen. She would be scared for her life. People scared they are going to die don't want sex, well at least the women don't. I think you have to tease men to keep them for going for pussy! Oh wait, are you guys all thinking that if you were being walked up to the gallows to be hung after being beaten and abused you just may not have a hard on? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 30, 2012 |
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I'll be quite simple here & agree with Mr. Jimmy Jump. But I will add...I doubt any woman being abducted, abused & raped would have a wet vagina. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2012 |
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First person view is never a good idea and it doesn't work in "The Abduction Of..."
At least, not to me.
I also don't like stories where the reality of the tale is too close to the reality we live in, where someone is abducted just for the hell of it. Where the abductor is a nutcase but he doesn't know it.
We, however, know.
And that's why I don't like it. In either reality.
Writing was good though.
JJ (6/10)
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