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Prison Bitch
Author: curtainsup
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(Added on Jan 29, 2012)
(This month 31027 readers) (Total 47806 readers) |
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Kyle meets his new prison bitch - a cute college kid with a pretty mouth and a tight, virgin ass. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
subtrac6
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Feb 25, 2012 |
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One minor criticism if i may. i found it distracting somewhat when the 3rd person narrator referred to the kid in a derogatory manner, the same why Kyle does. i may be wrong, but the narrator shouldn't be showing such obvious bias. Excellent story, i want to read more. thank you for the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
gigiatexaslady
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Feb 1, 2012 |
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Waiting on chapter 2. Did good with the topic. Don't make us wait too long. (9/10)
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Peter-2u
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Jan 31, 2012 |
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Nicely done. You took a well worn theme and turned it into something well worth the read. I'm assigning you a well deserved "9" and herein hope to encourage you to write on. Not so much for what's to come of the story, but to hear you're telling of it.
Pete (9/10)
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