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Corporal Punishment
Author: curtainsup
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(Added on Feb 5, 2012)
(This month 26063 readers) (Total 42600 readers) |
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After Lisa fails her class, her professor gives her a lesson in obedience, spanking her pale ass raw before fucking her tight, virgin pussy and her even tighter asshole. |
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| Reviewer:
zenoida
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Nov 6, 2014 |
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I loved this story. Classic setting, and a good build up without any unnecessary extra, but with enough twists and creative details to make it interesting. I hope more are coming (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 11, 2012 |
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Failing female students and authoritarian school teachers are a beloved subject of many a writer of any kind of flavour of stories.
The reason is because it is a subject which has a lot of potential, not so much in variation, but in angle of approach and incentives on either side of the desk...
Sadly, there's also a possibility of falling into the trap of the ever lurking cliché.
I'm afraid curtainsup has done the latter. By not following a storyline but rather the feverish spark that puts the endorphines to work.
As a result, we're being confronted with a tale which is rushed and uninspired; where a lecherous teacher throws any form of caution in the wind and manipulates a student into submission with the air and flair like it's part of the job and prescribed in the school's manual...
The writing was good; probably even better than I could admit right now. But that's because I was too much let down by the uninspired telling and the way we were presented with a pre-fabricated situation and the prototype of the rockstar teacher who's only in it for the groupies...
JJ (6/10)
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