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You're Mine
Author: Wildfire8470
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(Added on Mar 24, 2012)
(This month 10183 readers) (Total 22626 readers) |
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The story of a woman's first realization that she completely, wholly, belongs to another: her Dominant. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Mar 26, 2012 |
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It is better than IAN 2411 suggests, too short perhaps, not his thing certainly but it was good it was worth reading and that makes it a 7.
I am not going to give it a 9 to even things up but would suggest IAN revises his score upwards. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
IAN 2411
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Mar 26, 2012 |
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Not really my thing, and i thought the story was fast and maybe a little to fast. For the amount of words it was well written. A slower pace with your erotic thoughts, sensations and desires would have given it that missing ingredient. I am giving you a 5 because I think I needed more information. (5/10)
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