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Bedtime Scoup
Author: Darkroom
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(Added on Apr 15, 2012)
(This month 46288 readers) (Total 67954 readers) |
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One by one, beautiful tourists are stolen away from a Carribean resort and turned into the unwilling stars of an underground torture flick. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
vincent3
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Feb 27, 2015 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_add.php</b> on line <b>40</b><br />Lovely start. Looking forward to the progression for all three. Thank you for your effort.
Has all the elements needed for great enjoyment. (9/10)
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susankarlson
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Jul 11, 2014 |
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Obviously my extreme tastes require your captives to suffer far more pain, perhaps the new viewer being converted to sadism so she tortures the girls ? Keep at it. (6/10)
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CrazedDog
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Apr 28, 2012 |
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well written - looking forward for more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
brendragon
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Apr 27, 2012 |
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One of my particular fascinations is clitoral torture, and I love what you do with it here. I really can't wait to hear more... (10/10)
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lowstorm
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Apr 22, 2012 |
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Wish there was more story, please. I am not disappointed, I just wish there was.. more. And not simply waiting on our reviews. (10/10)
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Dark3yes
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Apr 17, 2012 |
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This was very good and rates up there with my favourite author Cortez.
One criticism would be that you should only feature one women per chapter, and then go into more detail.
Great work,keep going! (9/10)
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greatbossman
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Apr 17, 2012 |
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Quite good, For three women the article was a bit short. It needs filling out more with descriptions and atmosphere.
As for what should happen in future
Suggestions
Woman 1/breasts clamped between two planks of wood, which have a row of needles bonded to each so about 70 needles are in the breasts. Suspended by breasts Ankles and wrists tied together and soles of feet caned
Woman 2/ Suspended by ankles. Several enemas until belly very distended. But plugg and belly caning.
Woman3/ Stood on tiptoe wrists above head Wire just below clit attached to a electric fence generator. Tits fly when clit zapped
Goo Luck (8/10)
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wttozer
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Apr 16, 2012 |
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The concept is very good. I wish the author would spend more time on each "lady" otherwise, very nice. (8/10)
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henryrjr
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Apr 15, 2012 |
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The first part has got my intrest in where it will go from here. Will be looking forward for the next instalment. Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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