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Miss Wolsey
Author: Paladin
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(Added on May 26, 2002)
(This month 58670 readers) (Total 92347 readers) |
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Miss Wolsey, the 40 year old teacher did not take any chance in her whole life. But she made a mistake and she shouldn't kick Karen out of school. Later Karen was back as her Mistress and took the control of her. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Mar 1, 2007 |
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I enjoyed the parts where it was only Karen and Ms. Wolsey. The rest was too over the top unrealistic. Karen can trust each of the hundreds of people she gets to rape the teacher, Ms. Wolsey never goes to the police, there's a slave training facility a schoolgirl knows of... It just gets too fantastic, the author didn't know when to stop.
Apart from that lousy spelling. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bagles
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Aug 6, 2006 |
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Please keep up the good work and please write more stories abou Teacher's (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 15, 2004 |
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it started out realy good then just died (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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hyphen666 was, of course, correct but put it crudely. Content and imagination - good, execution - poor. Paladin is being punished for the "Curse of Spelcek". This is because English is one of those languages wherein the same phoneme has multiple spellings with different meanings. Spellcheck and its relatives ignore an improper usuage (e.g. waste for waist) as long as the improper usage is a legitimate "English" spelling. This is why when one submits an article for posting (versus writing garbage like this review) it is wise to write it, then set it aside and edit the story. If in doubt, consult a dictionary. Your writing deserves a better reading that it is getting.
Keep at it! (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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May 27, 2002 |
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The old dominated teacher turned into a sex slave caper, complete with your stereotypical villains and their usual techniques for convincing the reluctant teacher. I like the fact that our heroine is middle-aged, a refreshing break from the usual monotony of well built frustrated virgins in their early twenties. The old Asian is a pretty funny guy as well. On the down side it appears that the author is much too busy having fun with his story to bother to proof read it. I guess he thinks we readers enjoy trying to figure out what he really meant to say or are amused by the hundreds, or is it thousands,of misspellings.
I HAVE NEWS FOR YOU! THIS KIND OF NONSENSE GETS IN THE WAY OF MY ENJOYMENT OF YOUR STORY! THIS MEANS THAT YOU LOSE BECAUSE I'M NOT GOING TO READ ANYTHING ELSE YOU WRITE! (4/10)
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