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Author: graymangazer
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(Added on Aug 19, 2012)
(This month 33436 readers) (Total 48726 readers) |
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A shy young woman, out of curiosity visits a fetish shop, it becomes a life changing experience. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Sep 16, 2012 |
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I nearly gave up reading this wonderful story, because it seemed just like so many captured slave story's. The clever twist at the end however made this a really enjoyable story.
Please do write some more about these characters. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
graymangazer
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2012)
- I`m glad you enjoyed it and I will write more when I have finished what I am doing now, thanks again.
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| Reviewer:
travelin.fool
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Sep 4, 2012 |
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Great story. I can't wait to read the next two chpaters -- to see what happens to Domenique, and how Cassie, Sarah, and Megan please each other as their lives moves on. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
graymangazer
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2012)
- Thanks for the review, I never meant to write a sequel but I think I will have to rethink my plans.
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Aug 22, 2012 |
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An excellent story my friend! I can't wait for the next one. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
graymangazer
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2012)
- Thanks for the kind words and your help, I`ll be in touch soon.
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| Reviewer:
a.broadsword
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Aug 21, 2012 |
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It reminds me of my own story Jaded, or to be honest it is what Jaded should have been (10/10)
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- Replied by:
graymangazer
(Edit) (Aug 21, 2012)
- I have just had a look at Jaded, it looks a fine piece of work to me and I shall now read it properly.
Thanks for the review and the kind words.
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Aug 21, 2012 |
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Super start, lots of potential, please continue. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
graymangazer
(Edit) (Aug 21, 2012)
- Thanks for the kind words, I have some ideas and hope to find the time to write more.
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