Brooke’s Long Night

A work of erotic fiction by Wolf Ferret (wolfferret@gmail.com)

This was written at the request of a woman reader at BDSMLIBRARY The actions described are a mix of her ideas and mine. They are fantasy and any resemblance to real life is completely accidental.

Brooke was a 20 year old college student – majoring in men as far as anyone could tell. She liked men and made no secret of it. Perhaps she had acquired her taste for men from her mother, who had been married 4 times. Mother and her current stepfather were living hundreds of miles away. Brooke’s real father had long since disappeared and she was renting a room from one of her ex-stepfather who happened to live near her college.

Her ex-stepfather (Steve) did not feel any responsibility for her. Why should he? She was not his biological daughter and he was no longer married to her mother. As far as he was concerned, she was an adult who could take care of herself. He charged her market rent for a furnished room with two meals a day.

She fell several weeks behind in her rent and he offered her a deal. He had a custom of holding a weekly all night poker party for 5 of his male friends. They needed someone to act as waitress and serve beer and sandwiches. He would cut her rent in half if she’d do the job but she would have to work stark naked. Brooke wasn’t exactly a blushing virgin, so she thought about it for a while and then accepted. She worked several poker parties for Steve and had no difficulties except that the men kept trying to grope her. But she had expected that and didn’t think of it as a problem.

One day she got a phone call from Brian. He was 28 and one of the weekly poker players. He said he was getting married and was having a Bucks Party before the wedding. There would be 20 men and no women. It would be a long party roughly 9PM to 5AM and he’d pay her $1000 to do the nude waitress bit for them. And she could expect tips from the men.

She discussed it with Steve who said “They won’t pay you $1000 for passing drinks and food around. For that price, they’ll expect you to get on your back.”

“I know but I enjoy fucking so why not?”

“You enjoy fucking a man when you know him and can say STOP! Fucking 20 strangers who won’t take NO for an answer is another matter.”

“I could really use the money. The hell with the risk!”

Steve shrugged and replied, “You’re an adult. It’s your life and your body. Just don’t blame me!”

On the night, she dressed carefully in a low cut black dress that went to just above her knees. She had a frilly black bra and panties under the dress. She knew she would end up naked but hoped to get better tips if she gave them a strip show.

Steve drove her to Brian’s house. It turned out to be in a semi-rural area with the nearest neighbour about a quarter-mile away. Ideal for a noisy party – no one to complain about loud noises or screams. She got out of the car, went around to the driver’s side and bent over to kiss his cheek. “Thanks for the lift. Don’t forget to pick me up at 5AM.”

When she bent over, her dress came away from her body and he got an instant erection from looking down it and seeing her tits. He drove home and jerked off thinking about her lying on her back pulling a train.

She walked into the house and found that the noisy party had started already. A lot of the men had their shirts off and were just wearing underpants. The group ranged in age from 20 to 60.

They were sitting around drinking beer and watching a porn movie on a large flat screen TV. It showed a woman getting all 3 of her holes fucked at once. Brooke blushed as she saw the filthy act and looked for the kitchen. Brian pointed to the right door and told her “You’re over dressed but we will deal with that later.” Go get some clean glasses and bring us a tray of vodka shots to chase the beer.”

The kitchen was a mess. She had to wash glasses before she could serve anything. She was busy washing up when she heard Brian enter the kitchen. She glanced at him and was surprised to see his 9 inch cock hanging out. She could see that he hadn’t been cut and that his dick needed cleaning. She turned her back and pretended that she hadn’t noticed. He came up behind her, pulled one of her hands behind her back, and began running it up and down his cock.

He told her “You need to relax, this will help” as he took an ecstasy pill out of his pocket and forced it into her mouth. His hand over her mouth kept her from spitting it out until he forced her to drink some water and the pill was in her stomach.

He kept her rubbing his cock until he came all over her hand. “Clean up and then start serving the drinks!”

She was beginning to think that Steve’s warning had been correct but it was too late to change her mind, so she took a deep breath and carried the heavy tray into the room. A big bruiser of a man took the tray away and lifted her dress up to her neck. The men clapped and cheered at the sight of her flimsy black underwear and there were several calls “Hey Brian, didn’t you promise a bottomless waitress?”

“Yes, I did. She’s overdressed. Mac, do something about that!”

The big bruiser lifted her dress over her head and dropped it on the floor. Then he removed her bra and threw it away; He cupped one of her breasts in his left hand while his other hand slid inside her panties. “She’s smooth. Must have had a wax job.”

Someone said, “That’s a shame. I like to play with a nice thick bush.” More laughter and cries of “Hey her panties are getting wet. Let’s have a look.”

Brian said, “Brooke, take off those panties and lets see what you’ve got.”

She had nipples pierced with what looked like little gold barbells. Mac used one to twist her nipple, she moaned in pain, and he told her “Do what he says!” Brooke slid her panties down her legs and stepped out of them. She was embarrassed to be standing naked with Mac holding one of her breasts while his other hand rested on her triangle. That didn’t last long as he held her hands behind her back and displayed her to the loudly yelling men. He handed her the tray and Brian said, “Get to work.”

She walked around the room using both hands to carry the tray from man to man. The men ran their hands over her breasts, down her belly to her triangle and over her ass and hips. Sometimes she’d be standing between two men. One would be fondling her breasts while the other had a finger up her slit and rubbing her clit. The men were watching and laughing at the video and making jokes about replacing the actress with Brooke. The man with a finger up her slit announced “Hey! She likes it. She’s getting wet” and they could all see her pussy lips glistening with moisture.

She was humiliated. It was much worse than the poker parties and even worse than she’d expected when Brian offered a $1000 for her services. Steve had been right but it was much too late to run away.

When the tray was empty, she started for the kitchen to get more drinks. Brian stopped her with an order, “Put the tray down, and put your arms over your head and dance for us.”

She stood there and swayed her hips. The men laughed and said she needed training and practice. “Put on the dance DVD.”  It turned out to be a naked woman doing a belly dance. “Now copy her!” They kept her dancing until she had sweat covering her body. Then Brian pointed to a thick blanket on the floor, handed her a 10 inch dildo and said, “Give us a show. Play with yourself.”

The dildo had clearly been used. There were stains and hair on it.  She turned to take it into the kitchen but Brian stopped her with “Where are you going?”

“Its dirty, I want to wash it.”

“You’ve got a mouth. Use it! Its part of the show.”

She began to lick it and was told, “You can do better. Charlie, give her a hand,”

Charlie turned out to be a handsome blonde haired young man of about 25. She had been eyeing him as the best looking man in the audience.

He put the tip of the dildo in her mouth. He told her to move her head up and down the shaft. She was too slow, so he took a handful of hair and pulled her head back and forth. He told her, “Now take a deep breath” as he pulled her head back and shoved the dildo down her throat. The watching men could see her throat muscles bulging as she began to panic and gasp for air. He pulled it up, told her to relax and breathe through her nose, and plunged it deep into her throat again. He repeated that several times, announced, “That’s clean enough”, handed her the dildo and said; “Now get down and play with yourself.”

She lay down on the blanket, spread her legs wide and raised them in the air so that the men had a good view of her pussy and began thrusting the dildo in and out with one hand. The other hand caressed her breast. The action was accompanied by cheers, laughter and clicking cameras.

Two of the men decided to assist her. They knelt by her sides and fondled her breasts. One grabbed her ankles and pulled her legs up and back so that she was wide open. “She’s really wet, now she can get it in deeper.”

She began to thrust rapidly and deep and suddenly went into a screaming orgasm. The watching men cheered and applauded. “That’s the way to do it!”

Brian took the dildo away from her and Mac turned her over. His large hand under her belly raised her ass while someone held her head to the floor. Brian held the dildo in the air and said, “This is nice and wet. It doesn’t need any lube.”

He slowly pushed it all the way into her shit hole and worked it in and out a few times.

“That should loosen her up enough for us to get easy access.”

The man holding her head turned it to the side and Brian held the dildo to her lips.

“Its dirty again. Lick it clean.”

She hated the idea of licking her own shit but was frightened to refuse. She stuck out her tongue and slowly ran it over the length of the dildo.

Brian said, “That’s enough play. Turn her over and lets get to the real action.”

Soon she was lying on her back with Brian between her knees. Then his weight was holding her down and her soft breasts were pushed against his hard chest.  He entered her and began slow, deep thrusts. He grunted as he shot his seed into her and rolled off her. He was quickly replaced as the next man mounted her and began fucking.

Three or four men fucking her was enough to send her into another screaming orgasm but they kept it up until she had been fucked by about a third of the men.

“She’s getting sloppy. Let’s change holes while she drains.”

The pulled her to her feet and bent her over a table with two men holding her arms stretched out over her head.  She wasn’t an anal virgin but was still tight enough to need a bit of lubrication. Some olive oil massaged in with a finger took care of the problem.  Even so, she winced a bit as the first cock went in and began thrusting until she felt his seed enter her bowels.

It wasn’t fun and she didn’t get an orgasm out of it but she gritted her teeth and thought of a thousand dollars while another 6 or 7 men used her ass.

“Time for her last hole.”

They made her kneel and this time she had to do the work herself. She was told to lick and kiss each cock and sack before taking a cock in her mouth and running her head up and down it.  Several of the men pulled her head back and deep throated her. The last man washed his cum out of her mouth by pissing in it.

She had serviced every cock in the room by the time they finished and allowed her to collapse and lie panting on the floor. Brian let her lie there for a time and then told her “We need food after all that work, go get us some sandwiches.”

She made 3 dozen sandwiched, piled them on a tray and passed them around. She was fondled again but not as much as the first time. Then Brian asked “Have you fed Dick?” She was confused, “Who’s Dick?” and the men laughed. Someone went out and brought in a big beautiful black German Shepard. “That’s Dick!”

The men hand fed a few sandwiches to the dog and then he took a few from the tray. He seemed to like her; he kept sticking his nose against her pussy and ass. It was embarrassing and she kept pushing him away.

“I think he’s thirsty. Go get him some water.”

She brought him a big bowl of water and he began to lap it up. Someone said, “I’ll pay you $100 to get on your hands and knees and lap like that.” She hesitated and the man said, “Now its $50 and if you don’t do it we’ll shove you out the door and let you walk home naked.”

She dropped to her hands and knees and began to lap. The water tasted funny; perhaps the bowl had held some stale dog food. While she was lapping, she felt a tongue begin to lick her pussy. It felt good but wetter and rougher than she was used to. She looked over her shoulder and was startled to see Dick with his head between her legs. She tried to get up but the men held her while Dick ran his tongue deep into her. It was even pleasant, the dog worked much deeper then any man who had eaten her,

When the dog finished, a $100 note was dropped next to the bowl. “Just stay like that for another 10 minutes.” She wondered why they wanted her to stay on her hands and knees but money was money so she complied. But then she felt the dog rear up and put his paws on her back while his cock entered her pussy. She tried to stand but the men held her firmly in place. She felt the end of his cock swell into a ball until he was firmly locked in place and she couldn’t pull away, Dick was a big dog with lots of stamina, he pumped for half an hour while the men laughed and joked and took pictures.

When he finally pulled out, she collapsed sobbing on the floor while what felt like gallons of dog cum drained out of her.

Brian let her cry for a while before he said, “Its only 3AM, we’ve still got a couple of hours to play with her. I think we’ll give her a cum bath”

They pulled her over to the blanket, put her on her back and told her to put her hands behind her neck. Brian lay down on top of her with his cock resting on her belly and began rubbing it back and forth until his cum spurted out on her. Then big Mac sat on her chest with his cock between her breasts while two of the men used her breasts to rub his cock. After he came, they jerked themselves off over her face. The rest of the men took turns jerking off until she was covered with cum from her triangle to her hair.

Steve arrived to pick her up just as the last man’s cum spurted into her hair.

“You’ve made her work hard for her money.”

Brian replied, “Well, she never said stop or no! Help her dress and take her home.”

She didn’t want to bother with underwear and Steve helped her into her dress. Brian counted out 10 $100 notes and offered them to her but she was too shocked to accept so he gave them to Steve. Each of the men tipped her $50 and gave the money to Steve.

As they left, someone slapped her ass and said, “You make a good fuck toy. If you want to go pro, I know a pimp who will take you on.”

Steve said nothing as they drove home but listened to her sobbing and repeatedly muttering “Fuck Toy!”